Imminence

we knew it would rain

waking almost morning
opening the door
stepping out half dark
hoping for the last of night cool
on my skin, but instead
the world breathed warm
alive with mist
too close for stars

we knew it would rain
when day came and mist
pulled thin across the sky
until the sun singed
the unravelling edges
of the world and we
waded through the morning heat
water bucket, hay,
ducklings to the pond –
all of life seeking shelter
and shade and cool
until the doing was done
and we could slip silent into forest
among the quiet and dappling,
among the unstirring leaves.

we knew it would rain
mid afternoon
when the sky tilted a breeze
ocean pushed and
rushing through the valleys –
opening doors and windows
to let it rush through
across warm wood –
if not cooling then stirring at least.

we knew it would rain

early evening drinking tea
at the long table watching
the sky gather on the horizon –
darken , clot
purple and heavy and close –

said quick before the rain
and sat some more and finished our tea.

by the time we put the beet on to soak
the first drops were falling,
evaporating on contact
but falling falling

now we rushed –

my youngest and i
alone for a bit,
divvying up the tasks
between us,
calling goats in,
hurrying mother hens and horses,
covering bales.
closing doors and gates
under a sky that has now broken
in two and is pouring rain –
blessed rain in sheets thick and warm
full in our faces –
until drenched and drenched again

we meet up mid rush
only to laugh at the thunder crack sky
and each other soaked skinless
dripping hair plastered down our backs
stuck to our cheeks
entangled with petal and leaf.

mud smeared feet stemming the flow
of silt water ankle deep down the drive –
pulling up stepping stones from rain gulleys
with rain running rivulets down spines
trying to shape the flow, guiding water
away from the house to contour ponds
and overflows and soak aways

and all the while the rain that fell
and falls and falls
calls us to be here
alive and bellowing skin prayers –
our voices nothing to the song of frogs,
the silence of wings
and the rain that came
that comes
giving life.

inside we strip off wet clothes for dry
twist hair up in towels
loud laugh mop floors and wring and mop again
where our coming and going had created
inadvertant floods

make supper, chatter, eat
blood flowing strong rivers in our veins
the stream, become river, in the valley roaring too.

night will come quiet
with long soaking rain,
gentle now
like a sigh.


Fir Brendan at Earthweal’s weekly challenge: A COMMONS FOR ALL. Read more about it here.

https://earthweal.com/2023/02/13/a-commons-for-all/

14 responses to “Imminence”

  1. Sherry Marr Avatar
    Sherry Marr

    LOVE the video! Heavenly. You took me right there, and it was lovely. I especially love the gentle closing lines. Beautiful.

  2. memadtwo Avatar

    So much of the world now waiting for rain, or overflowing. You look to be in the right place with it. (K)

    1. lindi Avatar

      Absolutely love the rain – always have – but yes there can be a precarious relationship with too little or too much.

  3. Brendan Avatar

    Mmmmm. I take “immanence” as the impending vertical loom of rain, blessing down uplifting love. Love how it takes its time coming and is no surprise when it does. All the fulsome details — muddy feet, animal life under cover, the swaying glistening green of it. I now wonder if our indoor shower stalls are just pale emulations of the grand. Amen to the elementals of rain. (A praise which is worthy yet fraught these days for opposing reasons…)

    1. lindi Avatar

      I suppose that sums up most of our attempts at reconnection and relationship with the more than human world for now – worthy yet fraught. There has been a deathly comfort in keeping the living world at arms length – it will take us fair guts to exchange that comfort for living alive.

      1. Brendan Avatar

        Fair guts and the gun of extermination pointed at our heads, I’m afraid. Meanwhile we work on what’s worthy yet fraught.

  4. susanstoo Avatar

    “”to laugh at the thunder crack sky
    and each other soaked skinless”
    I felt the heat, I felt the wishing, the expectation, the near disappointment and then the blessing. And the skin in it all, finally “bellowing skin prayers” with all the other animals Powerful writing!

  5. lindi Avatar

    Thanks so much for reading Susan.

  6. Suzanne Avatar

    Such a lovely poem. I am reading it on one of the hottest days we’ve had in many a year. Hopefully it will rain tonight – there is a thunderstorm forecast.
    The way you describe your life on the farm in the height of summer is so lively. I can visualize it and can almost hear your laughter as you towel dry from the deluge. Beautiful writing.

  7. lindi Avatar

    Thanks Suzanne. Hope the rain came and cooled things down for you. 🌿

  8. sdtp33 Avatar

    A wonderful poem, we are never short of rain up here in the Pacific Northwest, but this captures a different kind of rain.
    “until the sun singed
    the unravelling edges
    of the world and we
    waded through the morning heat”
    That’s brilliant…JIM

    1. lindi Avatar

      Thanks so much. Summer rain is always such a delight. Though I pretty much love the rain in all seasos – today we have a early autumn rain. Soft drizzle that becomes mist that becomes drizzle for most of the day.

  9. paul scribbles Avatar

    Tumbles from the page like the downpour it renders. A truly elemental piece full of evocative and heart warming language, connecting the rains and those upon whom they fall. Beautiful.

    1. lindi Avatar

      Thank you. 🌿

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